(for the first Tanka - Orange is pronounced with 2 syllables)
sunset masterpiece
brush strokes of red and pink swirls
whispers of orange
hints of darkness peeking through
showcasing a flaming ball
brush strokes of red and pink swirls
whispers of orange
hints of darkness peeking through
showcasing a flaming ball
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white sprawling porches
tropical rain pounding down
washing the dry ground
watery sunlight peeks through
sweet scent of rain lingering
tropical rain pounding down
washing the dry ground
watery sunlight peeks through
sweet scent of rain lingering
Beautiful imagery! I do enjoy poetry but have no talent for it myself.
ReplyDeleteGreat post!
Writing short form poetry is hard. You do this very well.
ReplyDelete@Christine- I'm usually a rhyming poet- old school all the way- so the tanka or haiku are great challenges for me.
ReplyDelete@Mark-I was wanting to see if you did a haiku about songs :)...I did enjoy your post today even if it wasn't a haiku!